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All Deviations


She was my beauty queen
just eighteen,
with the love light in her eyes
We had nothing much,
but just this hunch
that everything was gonna turn out right

I was a "rock star"
not getting too far,
but we both knew things werent easy
Two lives
busting overtime
man she tried so hard to please me
and i give myself again....if i could go back when.

but I cant walk on burnt bridges,
and I cant fly if you aint got the sky
I cant dance on broken hinges
you see me try and i think you know why
it can never be again...unless we could go back when.

months done the line
and im making time,
for the things i missed out then.
I had the earth
but I missed the worth
of things that could have been.
and i give myself again....if i could go back when.

and I cant walk on burnt bridges,
and I cant fly if you aint got the sky
I cant dance on broken hinges
heres my heart dont believe its a lie
we can never be again...unless we could go back when.

now we can try over and over but all we are is getting older and we both know the end of the play, and it seems to me that every knockin on my door I'm thinking bout you every single day

but I cant walk on burnt bridges,
and I cant fly if you aint got the sky
I cant dance on broken hinges
you see me try and i think you know why
it can never be again...unless we could go back when.
©2007-2008 ~Teenage-Valentino
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Yes I did write a song about a girl. Its long overdue and if you have a problem with it then...im sorry but im not changing one verse.

My friend will shortly be working on piano for this and we'll have a recording sometime in the next few weeks.

Written for the band Gibralter.

if you think of a title let me know, and we'll see.
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=TehSext:iconTehSext: Sep 19, 2007, 10:16:59 PM
I love it.


Except the first two lines but i can't HEAR it, so who knows.
~Teenage-Valentino:iconTeenage-Valentino: Sep 19, 2007, 10:18:01 PM
how bout a hug now?

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Everytime I fuck up, Life moves me to the back of the line.
~Teenage-Valentino:iconTeenage-Valentino: Sep 19, 2007, 10:20:27 PM
didnt expect that...

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Everytime I fuck up, Life moves me to the back of the line.
~Teenage-Valentino:iconTeenage-Valentino: Sep 19, 2007, 10:23:49 PM
u like the song though? me and tony are gonna try to work some stuff out asap.

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Everytime I fuck up, Life moves me to the back of the line.
~Teenage-Valentino:iconTeenage-Valentino: Sep 19, 2007, 10:28:30 PM Mood: Joy
got a title?

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Everytime I fuck up, Life moves me to the back of the line.
=TehSext:iconTehSext: Sep 19, 2007, 10:29:21 PM
I'll think about it.


btw, have you seen my finished sculpture?